Topic: Television: Advantages and Disadvantages
Paragraph one: brief introduction of television and television effects children in many aspects.
Part one: advantages of television
1. Different TV programs can teach children different know ledges.
2. TV programming can open up children’s eyes and develop their thinking about society.
3. Watching TV is a more effective learning method than reading book.
Part two: disadvantages of television
1. Some TV programming that has a few violent scenarios can affect children more or less.
2. Too much TV watching can affect children’s health.
3. Spending much time on watching TV can also interfere with children’s study.
Final paragraph---conclusion. Knowing different television programs clearly and taking advantages of it well.
Hi DIngmei -- This is a good start to thinking about TV. We can work on this tomorrow; since this is a persuasive essay rather than a comparison/contrast essay, you'll need to take a stand and support it. For example, TV should or shouldn't be controlled by parents, or......???
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